These are the three things I have most commonly added or deleted from the quotes from yesterday. There are too many ands and not enough commas. Very little rephrasing.
I'm so excited about this article. I hope Bill likes it as much as I do. These people are doing such great things, and I really want to make sure everyone knows about them. Everyone should. They went from trying to make prosthetics out of two-liter bottles to a viable marketable prototype of an affordable, durable upper-extremity prosthetic, the only one of its kind, the product of four years of work. It's just beautiful. They're making a difference.
Back to writing.
CURRENTLY BEING BROUGHT BACK TO LIFE. The ramblings of a physicist-turned-freelance science writer forging a path toward adulthood.
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